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| "Fast" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: July 24, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can READ!!!! Mwahahahaha.*ahem* Since you've changed the format, I'll keep what other smart ass comments I have to myself. The fic is still wonderful, only more so now that it's fixed, and the chapters are still short. All is good in the world.
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 21:47 CDT
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Gah! My EYES!!! Can't...take...strain.... need more... spaces... Yeah. Get it yet? I enjoy reading what you write, but the format is killing my eyes. Still! *ahem* That aside, it seems your racing through the chapter! Save it for the motorcycles! Don't be afraid to slow down a little. Speaking of racing, I really like how you are writting the action scenes, they're very intence, and I look forward to the next update.
| Reviewed By: bunny453 On: June 14, 2006 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: bunny453 On: May 22, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE OR I WILL SEND HOPPY-SAN TOKILL YOU
| Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nsi On: April 14, 2006 23:16 CDT
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You are a cruel and evil person... Let's see. Yay for the Touzokuoh! Wow, not a lot of people know his(supposed) name. Heh. Yay for the hotness. Anywho, if you don't update soon, I'm going to have to force people to R&R, because I'm really interested in what happens. So update, or people will suffer.
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