| "Crash into Me" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: June 03, 2011 08:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the hell out of this story! BEST EVER! This is how the original plot should have been! But then people are like, what about the kids?! Who cares! You want viewers, throw this in the pot! I didn't think it was OOC in the least. |
Reviewed By: MimoriFanForever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She called him a walking popsicle thats a new one.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 06:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the story and I'm sorry it didn't get all the reviews that it deserved. IT WAS HOTTTTTT!!! I appreciated the build up to the climax and it wasn't too OOC, we all know Ryuho was hiding behind a facade of indifference. Hope this wasn't your last lemon, cause you got talent. Hope to read something from ya again.
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Title: HOLY!! (pun intended)
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, freakin', holy, mothera, I can't even describe how good your story is written! The build-up to their get-together had me wanting to beat the living daylights out of Ryuho!! (not like I could, mind you) Still, the way you brought them together and the great way you expressed Ryuho's inner turmoil and true feelings was just too good to be described! Man, I bow down to you! Good job! I hope this is a good review because this was by far one of the best short-stories I've ever read!! Good for you and keep up the awesome work!
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Title: HI MIRA!
Reviewed By: Aine of Knockaine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo hoo! I see you are posting over here too! (me too... I put my naughty stuff here ;o)) Ya' know I was thinking (I know scary thought) you should enter either this or Sweet and Sour Pork into MM's big contest under the lemons catergory! (or even both) I'm sure they would do well!! Oh and you stinker! Thank you for the plug on your bio page at FF!! that made my day when I saw that!! ^_^ Kisses, Aine
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Reviewed By: pancake On: April 21, 2006 02:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
this was VERY VERY VERY good! first lemon of these two that i've managed to find that was decent! *dies* i loved the lemon. it was very well written and in character. i think ry and mim were OOC when they were fighting, but the kindness and caring they expressed during the lemon felt natural and right. you should definately write more of this couple. maybe some PWPs.
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