| "A Twist of Personalities" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ronisha Swift On: April 02, 2004 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Had nice story line really cool but maybe make the chapters longer. Less syaoran in it need more of him in the chapters. Cool how you made sakura tough not naive and dense. Tight story
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Reviewed By: solace_no_tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 02:45 CST
Comment/Review:
It's certainly original and nice. Though it's kind of sad to see Sakura change into that kind of person. Also, I would like to point out that Lord of Nightmares (better known as L-sama) is not a man, but a woman. |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see the next part I do like it that she knows other magic then the card I had always thought that it was a little wierd. |
Reviewed By: SakuraStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, i like dis one! ^^ was gettin' a little sick of Sakura's personality *cowers whimper* ok ok, i take it back. but i would like 2 know where the hell Tomoyo is... ...and why Sakura didn't need the wand to seal fly.Anyway, keep the chapters comin'! |
