| "The Obsessions (part 2 The Obsessions Of Sex)" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: The Obsessions (part 2 The Obsessions Of Sex
Reviewed By: chinoodin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it is perfect next to every other fanifics I Like please update the next chapter and email me at jordanpennock1@yahoo.com hope you respond soon. :)
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Reviewed By: slickchick On: October 13, 2003 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! What's the big idea?! I want to know what she says! Hurry and finish
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Reviewed By: j ace On: June 11, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is very descriptive and fun. Put your mind to it and you could make some money!! |
Reviewed By: aNgalica-tHe*rEader On: May 31, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh cool write more soon please |
Reviewed By: Yama-Chan On: April 02, 2003 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it a lighthearted one rather than all these seious lemon/ecchi/yaoi etc.... VERY GOOD! Keep it up! WANT MORE UPDATES! |
Reviewed By: ShadowFox666 On: February 21, 2003 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story line its just i dont like cliff hangers |
Reviewed By: hamtaroiscool88 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story |
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster X On: February 03, 2003 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you REALLY need to work on your grammar and spelling.
Otherwise, it's a nice lemon. |
Reviewed By: fuzbal22 On: December 25, 2002 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz finish it soon
it is really good |
Reviewed By: odd1 On: November 29, 2002 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome please finish |
Reviewed By: w@// 0f i//u$i0N On: November 20, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT i hope the next one comes out soon pleez hurry |
Reviewed By: V!D3L On: October 27, 2002 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on update this story please ! I'm begging you it is the best fanfic of Gohan/Videl that I ever read and want the end so please . |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: October 23, 2002 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish you would spell right. You see, spelling is like one of the most important things in fan fics. hurry up and make a new chappy!!! |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: October 17, 2002 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am the 23 reviewer, come on, UPDATE! PLZ!!!! |
Reviewed By: V!D3L On: October 11, 2002 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!
Can't Wait Update !!!!!!! |
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