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Reviewed By: YANET-D^-^ FAN On: April 13, 2008 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IT WAS AWESOME LOVE THE LEMON GREAT ENDING ALSO~~HOPE YOU WRITE MORE OF THESE AWESOME
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Reviewed By: Beyond the Blood On: May 12, 2007 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. It was sweet. i'm terribly sorry if you wrote this like years ago and I'm reviewing for it. It's just that, I've just gotten the liking of Gaara and Hinata together. Started out with my curousity and now I love the couple. This is one of the top five lemon I've read, and believe me, I've read quite a few M rated fanfics myself. Your lemon is quite and has body language, which, most people don;t get the grasp of. I congratulate you on this.
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Title: AWWWW
Reviewed By: Kawaii~Neko722 On: April 25, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaaah!~ So cute! I love this story, it's so kawaii!~ Write more stories! If your lemon stories are this cute then I can't wait to read fluff stories made by you!
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Reviewed By: KagomeMarie On: January 17, 2007 07:06 CST
Comment/Review:
that was really good ^___^
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Reviewed By: Nimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're wonderful, I loved every detail of the story. I can't wait for another one.
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Title: I think I just became a hinataXgaara fan
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... W-O-W! I... I'm speechless... first off you are an absolutely amazing writer, and I'm just recently reading about this pairing and yours by far is the best I have ever read.... that was so so so good. I love the end the best of course... that was just so cute ^^... so yea just thought I'd let you know I loved it
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Reviewed By: Mic Mic^_^ On: August 28, 2006 16:55 CDT
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Heeey this story was good best Gaahina lemon I've read I think. i liked how at the end you said he would sleep that night it was a sweet and touching part ^_^ Mic Mic
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Reviewed By: ShadowLilly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I like this pairing and there arent many out there. Well written and enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Elvert On: April 17, 2006 13:29 CDT
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Yay! My favorite pairing! And so well-written! There are far too few really good GaaHinas in the net, but yours is definitely one of the best! Hmmm, longer one? Sounds VERY interesting...))) We'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: April 17, 2006 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it ^^ its such a great pairing too =) very unique. a suggestion for upcoming fics is to maybe include more about what the characters are thinking/feeling, seemed at a slight loss for details in that department, but nothing too major =) good work! ^^b
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