| "Breaking Point" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very "to the point." I loved it. I'm gonna check out what else you've written.
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Reviewed By: Yusagi Sombermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ZOMG! BAD Chichiri! XDD yeah...look who's talkin here...XD lol, very good...you conveyed the emotion and passion well through it, so it didn't just feel like another pointless smut! ^_^
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: diana05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really know your stuff! This was a really great read! Keep it up! ^^
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Title: ..Wow..
Reviewed By: Okashi Kuroda On: April 23, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo...whoa... *turns a shade of pink* That was...really passionate! ^^ Go Tasuki~!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! That was really good! I love the last part especially. i would never have thought of Chichiri being a voyeur. Great job!!!! *^_~*
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Reviewed By: Cass-chann On: April 17, 2006 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAWT! Goodness this was great! Passionate and sensual Tas-kun, and Miaka was willing! YIPPIE! O_O: HENTAI MONK! Bad boy Chichiri-kun! Good job!
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