| "Vegeta Black & White" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: JCA_Saiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! It features Vegeta in almost a malaise way. It's an unusaul story. (but in a good way!) Keep the chapters coming! -Kadeta, The Saiyan From JCA
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good so far can't wait for more keep writing and update soon. i want to see whats on the dman chip!!! o and if you dont mind can you double space your next chapters cus its kinda hard for me to read. thanks good job
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Reviewed By: LZ566 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it.
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Reviewed By: Great Start On: April 22, 2006 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting, it isn't often that I read 3 year fics in which they're from Vegeta's POV, and I really like the way you've done this. Most of the time they're all from Bulma's POV or camera, and if they ARE from Vegeta's it's always just about the sex. So I like this, it's quite good. The one thing that sorta bugged me were the spaces after the quotations.. " He said... "
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Reviewed By: Great Start On: April 22, 2006 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting, it isn't often that I read 3 year fics in which they're from Vegeta's POV, and I really like the way you've done this. Most of the time they're all from Bulma's POV or camera, and if they ARE from Vegeta's it's always just about the sex. So I like this, it's quite good. The one thing that sorta bugged me were the spaces after the quotations.. " He said... "
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