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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 02, 2006 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I got the lyrics. Here it is: Late at night you called on a phone, We talked about the day, When you found out he was cheating. You tell that it hurts to the bone, To trust someone that way. To find that he was deceving, And I know I've always just been your friend, But if you look my way, I'll make sure you'll never hurt again. Do you know I exist, just to promise you this, Endlessly to be true to you, And if you answer my prayer, I cross my heart and I'd swear Endlessly to be true to you, And if you'd only see, How beautiful you and I would be, endlessy. Ohh, oh yeah. I remember when you fell in love, I could not believe... That it was not with me I sent a secret prayer up above, And put my heart away. So that you could be free. And I know that right now you're broken in two, But did you know my heart's been broken since that day I met you. Do you know I exist, just to promise you this, Endlessly to be true to you, And if you answer my prayer, I cross my heart and I'd swear Endlessly to be true to you, And in my sweetest dream, You've learn to put your faith in me, enlessly, Sometimes the thing you need, Is the one thing you can't see If you put your faith in me, How beatiful you and I would be. Do you know I exist, just to promise you this, Endlessly to be true to you, And if you answer my prayer, I cross my heart and I'd swear Endlessly to be true to you, And if you'd only see How beatiful you and I would be, endlessly. END You don't have to use this if you don't want to. I just wanted to help you with the songs. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 02, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the people who wrote were b4-4. The name of the song is Endlessly. I didn't hear it but my friend showed me the lyrics. I think it goes good with this story. Well, I'm gonna go talk to my friend. Next time I'll try to give you the lyrics. Update soon. Bye!
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Title: A.N.
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank yoe for that super nice review wow. lol. And Viv N., you didn't even tell me the song title or artist, so how can i think about using it if I don't know? LOL. Cool story though. Thanks for reviewing. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: May 01, 2006 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! You updated.;p I'm so happy. Just to let you know, I think I found a song! I was doing a survey at school. Then it came to a question that said'Who's the best singer you know?' My friend put me. Then my other friends ask her what she put. She told them and they forced me to sing. I sang and then they were like ' Wow! that's really good.' And my friend told me to sing another song. She's gonna give me the lyrics. Sorry if I'm boring you with my story. Well it goes perfect with the story if... Kouga cheats on Kagome and breaks up with her. She calls InuYasha. You don't have to put that in the story. It's only if you want to. Then in the song it's about a guy's friend who says her hearts broken. He's promises that he would never hurt her. That he was already broken hearted. Well.... great chapter. And I know I don't have to review you everyday but I want to. This is such a great story. This is such a long review. Well... you don't have to use my song but I think it might go great with the story. :) Update when you can. Bye! ;)
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: wow!' On: May 01, 2006 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's good. I'ts REALLY good!! I love the story so far, and the backrounds and all, well done! unbelievable, it's your first story O.O!! update soon, cause i'm gonna wait. keep it goin':inu_inu_luvluv
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Title: A.N.: sorry guys...
Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: April 30, 2006 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man... I've been having a minor writer's block right now. I'm not sure how I want the next chapter to go. My muse is very quiet at the moment. I have this song I'd love to use but the mood is too advanced in the song for my story. Maybe later. Sorry I haven't updated yet. And Viv, just so you know, some writers only let you review if your a mm.org member. Others let non-members and members review. Like me. So hopefully I get the next chapter up by tonight and something inspiring will strike me. Thanks for all the support. :-)
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Reviewed By: Viv. N. On: April 30, 2006 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get something. How come I can send you a review but I can't send a review to some people? It says I have to be a member of mm.org. Oh well! When are you gonna update? Sorry if I sound rude. Ahhhh! I want to know what happens in the next chapter.>< Update soon and when you can. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: April 30, 2006 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You didn't update yet.:( But You must have something you had to do so you couldn't update. :) So update when you can.Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv. N. On: April 29, 2006 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D I'm glad you told us when you're going to update. I can't wait. You probably knew that. Ahhh! My sister is annoying me right now. Now she's sending me a evil look. LOL! I got to go eat(I'm starving). Bye!
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Title: Just so you know...
Reviewed By: TrinityK(nsi) On: April 29, 2006 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey all, just so you know (Viv N., lol) I'll be updating tonight. I have to do stuff today, so I'll do it all tonight. That's all. Thanks again!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Viv. N. On: April 29, 2006 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I just wanted to check on your story. You haven't updated yet. You probably were goning to update today or tommorrow. I can't wait. I'm gonna check your story in the afteroon. I will be so happy if you updated. I can't wait til you update. I know it's gonna be great. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Viv. N. On: April 28, 2006 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the weekends. No school. I can stay up and wake up late. And you said you were gonna update. Yay! I can't wait. I don't know what else to say so... I have to go my mom wants me to get off. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good thing that you promised that they'll end up together in the end, because otherwise I would have had to kill you. XD I got so depressed when Kagome said she was engaged! Wah! I'm really looking forward to seeing how this plays out. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Viv N. On: April 27, 2006 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh...So she didn't fall asleep next to InuYasha. :( Oh well!:) It would have been funny though. I guess I must've missed that part.>< I went backed and checked. I was so suprised that InuYasha cried that I must've forgot. Thanks for telling me. I really appreciate it. :D I can't wait for you to update. I know it's gonna be good. Oh! I'm gonna try to help you with the songs. I'll come back when I have an idea. Bye!
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Title: A.N.
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Viv N. ... Umm... Kagome didnt fall asleep next to Inuyasha. She went to her room. LoL. I really appreciate you reviewing everyday, what support!!! ;-) But really, if your busy you don't have to, I'll understand. Well I finished my AP essays, so I should be updating this weekend. Hmmm, what song to use next? I'm up for suggestions!!! ;-)
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