| "Long Lost...." Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: =D alight!!!
Reviewed By: Fairytalechic1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally i got to read it! my son didn't have school today, and it's super cold and cloudy outside. so it's a good day to sit in and relax. so i finally had the chance to sit and read the last 2 chappies that i've missed. . . ok, first let me say you're story is really developing. You're writing, i must say, is ahead of your years (don't take that offensively, it's a compliment, lol). I loved-loved the dance sequence and song that Inu and Kags did together. such emotion!! And they kissed!! Ahhhh!! wow ^.^ and awww, after the interview was so sad. whoo, who seen that comin' huh? Kagome going to the hospital for being over stressed. Ohhh, and he said he loved her! yaaay!! loved the song (beyond the sun) and Inu's performance was powerful and dramatic, nice nice :). The ending of the last chapter was perfect :D i'm just sorry i hadta take so long to read those 2 chaps. they were super great, i enjoyed them lots. took me about an hour to read them both though, lol. but they were worth it ^_^ so great job . . . oh, and Happy Birthday!!
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Reviewed By: Underwaterx3 On: September 16, 2006 23:02 CDT
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ummm the rating? i dunno how it got there...its so not a 5/10 its more like a 957439798768576/10
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Title: AHHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: Underwaterx3 On: September 16, 2006 23:00 CDT
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omiigosh!!! u need to hurry with the update im getting really impatient i cant wait to see wut happens!! lol ill keep checking everyday like i always do for the update....CANT WAIT!!
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Title: Great story!!
Reviewed By: Inu&Kags On: September 16, 2006 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved your story so much! I can't wait until you update which I hope is really soon because I really want to see what happends to Inuyasha and Kagome!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tearz On: September 13, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot to rate :)
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Reviewed By: Tearz On: September 13, 2006 14:31 CDT
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made me cry...but in a good way! ur so good at this story MAKE MORE ITS SO AWSUM! ^date soon!~!~!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_ears On: September 10, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO GOOD! UPDATE FAST AND SOON! CANT WAIT!
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Reviewed By: Underwaterx3 On: September 09, 2006 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great story!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 18:11 CDT
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YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! (Screams!) I'm so happy!! Because Kagome's ready to fall. God Kouga is so not right for her. Inuyasha only and forever!!!UPDATE SOON YOU ROCK!!!!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: pinkmiko16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 18:10 CDT
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The story was really long anf i like that about stories. It was such a sad but yet sweet story! I loved it! ^^ yuo did a really good job
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 19:17 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! Kawaiii!! Damn right Kags is gonna run away with that silver haired god!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an updation, ne? I keep falling more inlove with tis fic! More chappy, more love! School started this week, n it's a killer. I snuck on to read your fic, cuz am dying to read an updation like yours. I felt so sorry for kikyo. Like I said, your the only one that made me like kikyo. Then the whole scene with kags n Inu wuz hot! I mean, all the tension. Baka; thats the word for kags. Inuyasha is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO much better looking that Kouga eva will b! She obviously luvs Inu, the looks are big bonuses, so go for him! I wuz so happy when they kissed that night. I wanted to kill kouga myself when he hit inu's bootiful face!!lol. Every time i read a chapter I feel like writing an essay. So image how I feel about the whole fic itself. And believe me, I hate english writing.lol Once again, you've proven yourself to be a wonderful writer, even tho this is your first fic. I really still cant believe it. You make my fic seem like an ant.lol. It's been so long since i updated. I got the next chappy, but am too lazy to post it, plus all the reading i have to do now that am doing accounts and O.P STRESS!!!! Amma die trying ya kno.lol. OH n PLZ do bring on the lemon! I KNOW that it would be amazing! You've read InuGrrrl fics, lemons. And am sure you've learned a thing or two...maybe three or four.LOL. But, yes. If it's lemon or citrus, it's gonna be off the charts. No positive words would be able to describe it at all!^^ A so feel like a hentai.LoL. Thats jus me for you trini!!! Am glad you finally posted a story n updated too.^.^ Do take your time n update, am sure it will be worth it. OFCOURSE IT WILL. All the chapters are!:D I luv you trini, for writing your fic!!!!!!!!^.^!^__^
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Reviewed By: Half-Demon Punk ~nsi~ On: September 06, 2006 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Kagome finally stopped listening to the logic in her brain and listened to feelings in her heart. As for the lemon... I suggest you change the rating first. It says you have to have the rating 'Y' to write lemons. And can you give us people who don't really feel comfortable with lemons a warning first. I'm not telling you to write a lemon but I'm not telling you not to. So just do whatever you want. Kouga, they say ingnorance is bliss but you're going to have to face the harsh truth of reality. Kouga should stop having the idea of having the perfect relationship with Kagome 'cause it ain't gonna happen. Well, enough of me and my rambling's. I just want to thank you for the very long chapter and compliment you on a very, very, very, very, very good chapter. Update whenever you can. And I'm hoping that's soon. Well, now to do the homework my teacher's gave me. WHICH IS A WHOLE LOT!T_T Great chapter! Bye! :D
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 01:16 CDT
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Awww this was such an awesome chapter. I loved reading every second of it!! You did such a great job, everything you wrote and said, WOW. I LOVED IT!!!! I cannot wait for more. PLEASE update soon!! I wish I had this drive to finish my stories...*sigh*
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Reviewed By: Keeko~The~Silver~Witch On: September 04, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter it was wicked please update soon please
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