| "Long Lost...." Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very gifted writer. I love that you incorporate the songs into the chapters. Encouraging the readers to listen to it while reading is a great suggestion. There are very few spelling/grammatical errors which pleases me. I suggest re-reading (I know they're long chapters)your chapters to catch them. The reading experience is so much greater when there aren't wny errors. Great job! Keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U cease to amaze me ur good . the story is exsquisid(sorry if i mispelled) i loved it to no end and will continue to love this story till the end!!! much luv 2 ya keep it up p;zupdate soon
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this chapter made for your lateness but you where sick, had school like all of us. Well at least you actully came back to your story unlike some others out there. But hey I hope you update soon and keep on, keep on.
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Title: LEMON!
Reviewed By: xSimplicity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you so totally have to put a lemon heheh and yes that was a VERY long chapter -_- maybe I'm just a slow reader but it took me a half an hour to read O.o' anywho update soon I can't wait ^^
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Title: Excellenta'
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant brilliant. beautiful dancing .u r very talented at fanfics plz review soon.
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Reviewed By: kacey On: August 31, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS F#^@ing amazing!!!! the best story ive read in a looonnngggg time. thank god i started reading this when you left on a happy note. PLEASE Oh Please dont make it too painfull before she finally comes to her senses and dropps koga...please! great job writing, and cant wait to see what you do next.
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Reviewed By: scoobydoo123 On: August 31, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay first let me tell you im dying waiting for you to update! im so sucked into your story! and i listened to 45 and its one of my fav songs now. and if your running low on songs you should listen to hate me today by blue october. i think with how your story has been going you could find a spot for it, but its just a request. okay so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Half-Demon Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am confused. I remember I read the chapter but it says I sent in a review three days before it was posted. Anyway... it's almost a month since you updated. T_T Oh well, since school is coming back it's probably gonna be hard for you to update. so i'm not gonna start saying 'why aren't you updating?' or 'when are you updating?'. I'm just gonna say... update whenever you can. i hope it's soon but your probably really busy. so just update whenever you can. thanks. bye :D
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Reviewed By: Cagalli-San [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story! For some reason, I think Ayame might be involved more in later chapters. I don't know why but if Koga and Kikyo get together ( shouldn't happen...not right..not at all) But like I said, I think Ayame might get together with Koga....but chya neva know! No matter what you decide to do with your story, I'm sure it'll be great! It's truly an Awesome story! Long Lost... Is truly unique and you must keep up your great work!! And I LOVE the songs you put in! They fit so well!! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kt On: July 31, 2006 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...I REALLY like your story! Its so good! I mean the singing thing is getting a little cliche but you really make it your own unique story. Can't wait for the next chap! Oh and thanks for not making Kikiyo a bitch in this story because that's where I was thinkin this was gonna go. Great so far!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was a great long chappie!!! I loved it!!! I am so glad they finally acted on thier passion.. man kouga is gonan be pissed as all hell...
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*clears throat*Well trini, it seems that I've finally started to like kikyo. Your the first person to EVER... EVER make me like kikyo. I'll let it pass. Yet another updation n ofcourse I love it.You did a wonderful job! Seriously.If anyone new wuz to read this, they would think your pro or something. I know thats what I think, even tho I know it's your first. I was SO SO SO SO HAPPY WHEN I READ HOW KOUGA HAD LOOK. Why? I thought he wuz gonna dumb kagome!!! *groans* I wish he wuz gonna do that! And Kikyo? Oh, man!!! Did I say I love her?!?! Gosh, she's my new bestfriend, and I'm not afriad to say that now. But it's only for your fic, no one else. I'm suprise that you made me like someone that I've hated from start. The way she made kags jealous wuz awesome!! She's the conniving bitch I like. I love how stupid kagome can be!LOL. And dont talk about their performance. I wuz drooling just by the image of how u made Inuyasha look.*wipes mouth* I think I'm still drooling.LOL. You are genuinely awe-inspiring. OH, and the kissing?!?! FUCKING FUCK!!!!!!! I laughed when they looked at the audience then went back to their amazing kiss. YES! The kiss of LOVE. Again I say. Your cliffies!!! Why?? *groans* I wont argue anymore, cuz now i that i post a story I'm gonna do the same now. I'm gonna post the next chappy today or tomorrow. It's been so long.lol I've been busy with shopping and chillaxing with my friends.lol. I'm glad you updationg on this tremendous. More than glad actually. I really love your story, and that chapter too! I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Ja ne!!^.^
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 03:07 CDT
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i so LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really, really, REALLLLLLLYYYYYY!!! HOPE you up-date VARY soon i'm dieing to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please, please,PLEASE!!!!!!! up-date SOOOOOOONNNNN!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So we are going to like Kikyo and Koga, huh? Well I'll take your word for it but right now I hate Kikyo for doing that to Kags. But I love what Inuyasha did. All I could say to that was... wow. So update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: July 29, 2006 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o' i did not see that one coming lol totally out of teh blue until it was actually over and i must say that im still in shock lol update soon =D
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