| "Something Like Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan not signed in On: May 13, 2006 00:41 CDT
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ok i'm in love and i need an update...please?
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Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 13:35 CDT
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This was a great second chapter. The case is a bit disturbing, but that's fine. I agree with Cyl on how you portray Ryo. You do a wonderful job on both him and Dee. Still can't wait to find out why Dee broke up with him. Your description of the police stuff is fine, so don't worry. ^_^ It would take a long time to research all the proper procedures and such. Anyways, like I said, great second chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Thanks for the story, Hana Tenshi!
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Reviewed By: Cyl On: April 20, 2006 01:48 CDT
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Thanks for the new chapter! I like the way you characterize Ryo - more realistic than most authors, I think. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Steambolt On: April 19, 2006 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just want to say THANK YOU!
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Title: maylee
Reviewed By: maylee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 16:42 CDT
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Nice story so far. I can't wait to find out what happened between those two. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cyl On: April 17, 2006 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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Ohhhhhh please update soon! You write so nicely - I can't wait to see what's going on!
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