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| "Neighboring Emotions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: love
Reviewed By: elise756 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz keep up the good work
| Title: i luuuuv it
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really really really luv this!! pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaazzzzzzze update!!
| Reviewed By: Fullmetal_Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story alot, the one thing that bothers me though is the fact that you use short sentences. you can usually string them together to make into a longer sentence, so it wouldnt be so choopy when read. Another thing is, and i say this to other perople here, paragrahs are GOOD! everytime someone talks its another paragrph, another line. that way you dont get confused when reading, and everyhting isnt so squished. plus, it makes your story appear longer ;) Anyway, i love the way this story is heading, im anxious for another chapter! im soooo worried about me Edo-Kun *tear* Much Love! -FMA
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