| "Heliotrope" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: the mighty mighty m [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YUM. Hot sex saved from generic-ness by how you let each of their personalities come though. It's a sign of how throughly you melted my brain that when I read purple I was like: ...Nagamitsu?
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh...you are going to make a Mugen/Jin/Fuu fic soon huh? It was pretty good.
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Reviewed By: lunaD On: June 07, 2006 23:20 CDT
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This absolutely, positively can NOT be the end. Where is the purple?? I would love for you to write a lemon with all three. You're an exxxcellent writer! Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: ThePinkNinja7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job. It was like one long beautiful poem. Absolutely amazing... When i got to the end.. i was like... Purple? ... Who the hell is purple... My next expression ......... o.o;;; "Oh..." Lol... i'm so stupid sometimes. Anyways... yeah.. extremely wonderful!
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Title: practice, huh?
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All the lemons I've ever read are always the same. Same sequence, same descriptioin, everything...That said, yours was very artistic while still being beautiful and erotic. you described Mugen's animalistic personality well and JIn was soft and passionate, yet smooth like water. you made the personalities match their styles. Fuu was a little one-dimensoinal but i don't see that as a flaw because it wasn't the point of your story. you set out to depict the differences in the two characters, JIn and MUgen, and you did that extremely well. for a simple 'practice' lemon, you are are already well on your way to being set apart as different from everyone else. beautiful.
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Title: delicious...i love red, i love blue...i LOVE purple...
Reviewed By: meowmixktty On: May 19, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved that! but ya know...you should really write about fuu...and purple... hehehe! later!
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Reviewed By: coldqueen On: May 10, 2006 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved it! And...this explains the toe-sucking comment...
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Title: such pretty colors
Reviewed By: FrustratedPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a cruel ending for readers. Wonderful portrayals.
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Title: PURPLE!
Reviewed By: StarlessNight On: April 18, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAVE HER TRY PURPLE!!!! PLEASE I NEED PURPLE!!!! lol... mmm.... purple...
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Reviewed By: ardane1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! *Fans self*, can't wait for the citrus in the other story. Especially the "purple", you are going to give us some "purple" after that right? Can't think of anything more to say, have to take a cold shower now.
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Reviewed By: CoffeeGyrl not signed in On: April 16, 2006 21:39 CDT
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Oooo I really, really like this. Very artistic and flowing. Good use of physcial/mental discription such as burns like snow, over turned ink, and loved/afraid of those hands, I really liked those phrases. I adored the red, blue maybe purple lines those were great. You did an amazing job on this lemon and I eagerly await future writtings. You are a very good writter with poetic talent.
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