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| "Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was pretty good. Deliciously angsty. I think it would have been better if you left out that last little section that was in italics and had just ended it at Vash's statement. But that is just my opinion.
| Title: Easy start
Reviewed By: vashette [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok and that and a good start, but I feel that you DO need to get more detailed. "Strech Marks"? Interesting chapter name. Are you trying to make Wolfwood a plant also? Anyhow, nice so far I would say. vashette
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