"You're beautiful" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 17:43 CDT Comment/Review: It was cute, and although i hate that song, I LOVED this fic! Excellent job! I loved how they were very in character, even though the setting was modern!
| Reviewed By: Shiruartist On: July 23, 2006 00:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWESOME fanfic!!! ^_^d It's unique, but I gave you an 8 for originality since you based the story on a song. Style of writing? Great, but it seemed that Sophie was a tad OOC. o.O It was still awesome though, and because of everything, will be a story that will remain in my mind for a while to come. ^_~ So, I gave you a 10 because I just loved it. Especially how Sophie managed to give Howl her business card. But the whole "pure-heart" shpiel I don't really believe. You could say that it was colored or orderly. Something like that, not boring and cliche' as "pure-hearted" But I did love it. ^.^ It would go great on its own or with a sequel, depending on how you went with the story line.
| Reviewed By: AyaJaganshi On: April 18, 2006 16:59 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutly loved it! ^.^ I hope that you continue this, i believe that it would end up to be a very interesting fanfic. If you do decide to continue please send me an email: loveslittleangel56@hotmail.com Hope for you to continue! ~Aya
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