| "Life eternal" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: dementra_the_ On: April 08, 2007 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this story is really good.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I really like it. Very creative.....and very ...detailed, if you kno what I mean...^_^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei (NLI) On: June 28, 2006 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a good thing that Koenma went ahead and agreed, I have a feeling that if he hadn't Hiei would have done it anyway. At least that's one problem they've got settled now. Good chapter, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: kwitchr On: June 17, 2006 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is the best ever. plese update soon.
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Title: awwwwwww
Reviewed By: HieiLover2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this is so cute. i'm not a big fan of hieixyusuke but that was adorable. i loved it.
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Reviewed By: mizaminer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting turn of events. Although I'm a bit confused about how much time has passed that the twins are already talking. Otherwise keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei(NLI) On: May 25, 2006 16:06 CDT
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This chapter just cracks me up, what they did to Kuwabara's room. I'm sure he's plotting some evil way to get back at them the next time he sees them lol Ahhh so now Yusuke's expecting *grins* Can't wait to see how many of the anklebiters he pops out. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 13:00 CDT
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There is sex in every chapter! God! I did think that it was great, but Hiei and Yusuke were a litle OOC. You did give reasons for it, however, but I felt like I was missing the character revelations that they went through when they became closer. The whole Keiko ideal, from start to finish cracked me up, but I did think that Keiko was a little too stupid in this fic. At the sleep over, I thought that she was a little too linient towards Yusuke. I had hoped that she would have slapped him sooner and stormed off, but she had to see Hiei and Yusuke kissing before that happened. It was a great fic though, but there were some things that I noticed. Like how you made the kinds, and then just sort of tossed them aside. It seemed to me that the Hiei you wrote wouldn't do that because they ment more to him. Like I said before, I did enjoy the fic, and I am glad I read it. Ja!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like Y/H pairings. I think the story is really cool and funny at times. I love Kurama's teasing, Kuwabara never saw it coming. Keep up the good work.
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