| "Someone help me think of title plz?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: March 18, 2002 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey this is just an a/n, I know the ending was a little fast and if you have any ideas if ANYONE has an idea's e-mail me and i will continue it...
Snoochy's Jess |
Reviewed By: Berserk Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot something. when you said don't read it if you don't like it, i have to ask. what guy would not like to read a yuri fic? and please continue the story. |
Reviewed By: Berserk Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, but why did you end it so soon. it could go uch farther than this. also i think i have a title for you. The Lesbian Experience, featuring Bra. if you don't like it fine then. all i ask is that you consider it, and write more. |
