| "Things in the Sheets" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: me,me,me!
Reviewed By: catsura On: October 06, 2006 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think, personally, you should add another chap. This was really good! Please?
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Reviewed By: Inusana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was a very entertaining fanfic all in all. You had a few mistakes in grammer but honestly I think that you had a great idea. It's original in itself and I think you should continue on with it.
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man it's a trip PLZ! update
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Title: hiei and the cherry
Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was...awesome. something i never would have thought of but you pulled it off beautifully. although i could see this turning into a longer fix if you got the time and were up for it. please write more!!! thanks! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Roxi On: July 09, 2006 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Write more,Haru is so sexii
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Title: So funny
Reviewed By: Tali Mi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why can't they have something more then a ten AHHHHH So funny your a genius keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty pretty pretty please continue this..i love Haru/Tohru stores ..pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss sssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! I'll have Meefy *glances at boyfriend* do a dance *glares and grubmes* Comeon Meefy Dance *Meefy frowns and dose a little dance* see he wants to read more to!!!!
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Title: liked it
Reviewed By: Gwenwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. Very interesting, but I would work on the grammer. Kinda made it a little hard to read, but otherwise I loved it :) Keep up the good work :)
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Title: I Liked it!!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was funny, and at the same time it didn't take away from the hentai part. It was very good for your first attempt! Please write some more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: May 07, 2006 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was thoroughly entertaining.
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Reviewed By: dk1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. It's original and refreshing. I would definitely like to see you continue this. The only suggestion that I would make is to draw out the het part a little more. I got really caught up in the story and then it was over.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think you should definatly continue it..i love Haru..
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: VIperStiNg On: April 22, 2006 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep wrighing, its good, im sure if u develop the story more it will become a realy good fan fic! :)
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