| "Only You" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:37 CST
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wow even in its early stages this story is good. I cant wait to see what will happen next. please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 20:27 CDT
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its good but your first and second chapter are the same
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Title: there are two chapter 1's
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 02:14 CDT
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I Like the story so far, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I wan to see more please I looks good so far.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up I want more please.
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Reviewed By: gaara_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its pretty good. maybe add a bit more detail. but dont delete it!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: hulagurl_55 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though there is only one chapter shown right now i can tell that this is going to be an interesting story and im anxious to read more..i hope you post more chapters up soon..
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Reviewed By: xchibi_ahouX On: April 23, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so short.. please write more in chapters. other wise ill steal your story and make it my own buhaha kiddin i would never do that!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:50 CDT
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Who's the father? I'm going to wait for the answer...just please give the answer. Great writing, most of the same story ideas turn out to be really immature and have loads of grammical errors as well for some reason, but so far your's is doing alright.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: April 18, 2006 20:16 CDT
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ahh! who's the father?! i must know! please write more... this was very good.
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