| "Blood and Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: HERE IS THAT SECOND REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HERE IS THAT SECOND REVIEW that I said I would put if you updated and you DID!!!!!! I AM SOOO HAPPY!!!!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO PUTTING ANOTHER REVIEW IS NO SWEAT!! LOL GREAT JOB!!!!KUDOS TO YOU FOR THE GOOD LEMON!!!!
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Title: GREAT GREAT GREAT
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool!!!! I loved the...um..."scene"...yeah.!!!!! It was really good for a first time lemon. I give it a 10!!! I loved this chapter!! But I have a question..I will sound stupid for asking this but...isnt it so that if Inuyasha were to have bitten Kagome, wouldnt that make them mates? If so...why didnt he? That would have been cute for those to be mates. Are there going to be more Inu/Kag fluff and lemon scenes!??!! I HOPE SO!!! WELL THANKYOU SOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!Good luck with your exams by the way. I have them coming up too! AND I hope your english project went good. I had to do two in english I STILL havent finished one so kudos to you for actually working on!! I just laid it off lol. ANyWhO-GREAT JOB!!!!!!!^_^_^_^
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Title: *_* Whoaaaaaaaaa!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! I'm speechless~Good job on the hotness, keep it coming! ~Thank you~
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Reviewed By: frostyshake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this is a pretty good story, and the lemon was great, you have nothing to worry about. You did not really delve into how and why Kagome was captured but I am assuming you will write about that in upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay this is a very great vampire story and good job with the lemon. It was very soft and fit the story nicely.Unfortunetly I have some cc, please don't take this as a flame, for I have done the same thing with my stories, until someone pointed it out to me. When you have a conversation between two people, they should be seperated into new paragraphs, it makes it easier who is speaking with whom. Other than that I await your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where this story is going so far. I don't think I've ever read a good vampire type storry before for Inu-Yasha. Good job on teh lemon part. Keep up the updating and I'll keep up with the reviews!
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Title: IRE_READ IT!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just re-read the story again because I really wnat it to update!! this story is so cool and its going somewhere and...PLEASE UPDATE IT!! I will love you forever...okay thats too far but I will......REVIEW TWICE EVERY CHAPTER!!! THREE TIMES EVEN IF YOU PLEASE UPDATE!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I hope your life is going good. If that is the reason you arent updating then I wont pressure you only wish you better. Okay well...great job on the story and I hope you update!!! ^_^ :D Maybe you could have a "close encounter" with inu and kag...or maybe realize why her side hurts...why does it hurt...i have an idea but idk............okay sry BYE!!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool!! This story is really cool and has a cool plot!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.....seriously......this wait is killing me......DO YOU LIKE DEATH OR SOMETHING!!!!.....wait.....you have a vampire fic.....okay now I am just babbling but really I can't wait for the next one!!! Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: cryptic91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story, I'm so hooked! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: hiiii
Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyyyyy first to review...neways I really enjoy the story so far but I need to know what is the big secret the suspense is killing me....plz update as soon as possible
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