| "The Virgin's Experiment" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story ...love it
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Reviewed By: battousai69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it...great writing!
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: April 19, 2006 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it ....there's nothing i would change ...its sweet and erotic
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Title: Excellent!!
Reviewed By: Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this piece!! Great, really, great one shot! I'm sure that Kiki loved it too!!!! Nice gift there! U know with Kagome's nickname, loved it!! LOL. Sure that you'll make our Kiki proud 'cause this is a very, very good job. Great and very sensual scene and images you create. Excellent!! Mage
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 12:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Beautifully written...congratulations!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 10:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was awesome you rock
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: April 19, 2006 09:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
i have to say you did Inugrrrl proud. i couldn't think of a better gift fic for her. i know a lot of one shot hentai fics tend to be PWP but this one was beautifully done and really showed the power that a woman can hold over men. you had everything, plot, emotion, brillant discriptions, and one hell of a lemon. great work!
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Reviewed By: blue girl On: April 19, 2006 08:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
That was just lovely!
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