| "The Virgin's Experiment" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really, like it huh^^ THANX!!! I love your stories!! Really enjoy them too. You have me grinning from ear to ear...and it's my first fic! *sqeals* I'm now a happy happy teen on the loose. lol^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goood good good . i like that had me on edge at the club .
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY HOT, VERY SEXY!!!!!! GOOD JOB~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 10, 2006 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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DAMN! This was original and very very hot. Thanks for sharing with us!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word: Magnificent. This was truly beautiful. Could actually feel what was going on between the characters. I loved it. But when I saw KiKi's name in there...she'll love it as much as the rest of us. Most excellent job.
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Title: WooooT!
Reviewed By: Inus_Bad_Beyotch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 02:36 EDT
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Hawt. You & your beta/giftee did an excellent job. Now all you've gotta do i grace us with more! :wink:
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gives you a round of applause* That oneshot has definitely just earned its place in my top ten of best lemons ever written and trust me, I've read many. The only problem I had was with how far Kagome went with the erotic dancing. I happen to be a virgin and I sure as hell WOULD NOT have done what you made her do, but on a brighter note, keep up the good work and you will certainly be hearing fom me again.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story ...love it
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Reviewed By: battousai69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it...great writing!
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: April 19, 2006 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it ....there's nothing i would change ...its sweet and erotic
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Title: Excellent!!
Reviewed By: Mage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 13:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this piece!! Great, really, great one shot! I'm sure that Kiki loved it too!!!! Nice gift there! U know with Kagome's nickname, loved it!! LOL. Sure that you'll make our Kiki proud 'cause this is a very, very good job. Great and very sensual scene and images you create. Excellent!! Mage
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 12:23 EDT
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Beautifully written...congratulations!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 10:17 EDT
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That was awesome you rock
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: April 19, 2006 09:23 EDT
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i have to say you did Inugrrrl proud. i couldn't think of a better gift fic for her. i know a lot of one shot hentai fics tend to be PWP but this one was beautifully done and really showed the power that a woman can hold over men. you had everything, plot, emotion, brillant discriptions, and one hell of a lemon. great work!
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Reviewed By: blue girl On: April 19, 2006 08:22 EDT
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That was just lovely!
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