| "Verismo" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 16:49 CDT
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I really hope you continue writing this fic. I think it's great!
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 22:10 CDT
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Heya! I had mochi chocolate ice cream today and it was fantastic. Yes, it reminded me of the hot, yummy scene of Gojyo and Hakkai, only I couldn't delve into the fantasy because I was at a restaurant with my mom. I sure as hell wasn't going to explain why I found the mochi a little amusing. Speaking of explaining, I am so looking forward to Hakkai telling Goku about the "intimate details" of intercourse. I can just see Goku flat out saying, "So when you and Gojyo were in the tree" and poor Sanzo chocking on his cigarette.
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::hugs:: Thank you for the dedication! I was very surprised when I read the note at the beginning and when I got to the end, I loved it! That was perfect! Now to Hakkai and Gojyo (yummy...). Hakkai's reaction to Gojyo's suggestion makes it pretty obvious what had exactly happened that "one time" before he was with Gojyo. I am curious if Hakkai will tell Gojyo, or our fav kappa will figure it out and let it drop. And don't feel bad about being late in posting. I haven't writen anything in over a year. Too many ideas take root in my brain and I have a hard time focusing on just one. That is very bad.
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Title: Yay! You updated!
Reviewed By: s0hmam0miji On: January 17, 2007 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new chappie! Yay! Can't wait to see where this all goes! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the questions to be asked! LOL I can't wait to see Sanzo's expression AND explination for that!
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Reviewed By: s0hmam0miji On: December 12, 2006 15:28 CST
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Very cool! ^_^ Looking forward to more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: pasc55 On: October 03, 2006 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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IT 's good i want to know the evolution o relationship of hakkai and gogyo
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 22:16 CDT
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Sex in a tree. Predecessor to the Mile High Club. Gojyo would do that because he is that freaking kinky!
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Reviewed By: nomalaz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to apologize for not reviewing sooner and stupid me didn't even realize that you had chap 3 up. All in all, I am really enjoying this fic. The music you've chosen work very well (not to mention they're fav songs I grew up on). I look forward for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 11:59 CDT
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It's Sayoko. SA-YO-KO.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was absolutely delicious and I can't wait for more! I love the pairing and you are an amazing writer - please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Sayoko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 18:49 CDT
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nicely done. ne, Gojyo has this thing about giving people nicknames (Goku = "monkey"/"ape"; Sanzo = "mad monk"). Can you have Gojyo call Hakkai "baby"? =) That'd be sweet... =)
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Reviewed By: Gyrfalconne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:55 CDT
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Hmm, I like the way this starts out, and I'm actually curious to see where you take it, please update soon!
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Title: Wonderful start!
Reviewed By: pyrzm not signed in On: April 19, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is off to a great start. Really well written, too! Just a couple of minor nitpicks. Blood isn't vermillion, and calling Goj a halfling makes me think of hobbits! *grin* He's a half breed. More soon, I hope! It's so great to find well written fics for this story.
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