| "Epilogue" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a heartbreaking ending! But I think that is how Ichogo and Rukia's feelings are for each other. It is deep to the point where they would die for one another. IT sad how everyone in your story is dead from the anime. It was a great story!
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Reviewed By: iridescent On: October 08, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply beautiful. I can't even begin to tell you how good that story is. Not only does it fit perfectly withing the bleach story line, but you described the characters so well in reference to how much they have changed due to what happened. the only thing you need to work on is probably polishing up the flashbacks so the transitions are smoother and easier to understand from the present to the past references. other than that i love this fic. well done!
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Reviewed By: d-dih On: May 05, 2007 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good
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Reviewed By: Just Another Reader On: February 23, 2007 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Such a tragic, yet believable and artistic way to end the series. All the characters were very well portrayed, and the plot is so astoundingly original and well done that I'll probably be disapointed by the actual cannon ending. Simply outstanding.
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Reviewed By: ladysekhmetka On: November 14, 2006 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How elegant your story is. It makes me want to do fanart ^.^
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Reviewed By: ENVYme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really nice story, just the current flash backs bothered me though lol but overall I enjoyed reading it
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Reviewed By: ichigodl On: May 31, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was sad. i should comment that we should see of what happens next after rukia dies. a scene with ichigo crying ova rukia's death is so sad an melancholy. this actually woulda been good for an anime.
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