| "The Demon's Den" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: yuuri On: August 23, 2007 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is really good,please update,i have to know whats going to happen
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_rogue On: June 18, 2006 13:22 CDT
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I really love your story!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!^_^ Its an awesome story!
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: June 12, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This gets better with every chapter. It has a nice slow buildup. Lots of lovely tension and potential just waiting to be delivered. I look forward to every update.
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Reviewed By: Spunky87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:13 CDT
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Interesting. I waited a while before actually reading this fic, for some reason it didn't seem to attract me or something. But I am glad I read it cause its really interesting and unique. The only thing that bothered me for this chapter was the odd placement of capitals on words that shouldn't have them. Even if you are in a rush to post a chapter, stuff like this should be picked up by the editor in Word or maybe you should run it through a beta. The better the writing is structure-wise, the better and more enjoyable the entire story. But great story! Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Giggles23 On: May 07, 2006 19:23 CDT
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More please!!! I'm really enjoying your story.
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Reviewed By: ShinigamiSeiji On: May 02, 2006 20:09 CDT
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Most definitly can't wait to read another chapter of this. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 30, 2006 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm. Interesting. I'm looking forward to reading where you take this.
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Reviewed By: silverwyvern On: April 20, 2006 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems very interesting so far. Sounds liks a good plot and very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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