| "Danny Phantom -- Shadow-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: good story
Reviewed By: rikulover101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very good story. i had a lot of fun reading it. it was also very original and i would enjoy reading a sequle. keep up the good work.
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Title: *GLARE*
Reviewed By: Tear Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*You look up to see the infamous Tear Alchemist staring straight at you* Don't try to run it is useless.*She jumps down....Suddenly tears well in her blue eyes* HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING!!! KYAAAA!!!*Turns away pullig hair* Was it just a ghost or something more sinister?!!! I NEED TO KNOWWWWW!!!! Oh and that opening was great!!...Of course I...like dark stuff, BUT THAT'S BESIDES THE POINT!! Please do us all a huge favor and write MORE....*runs away laughing like a Braughton escapee*
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