| "The Path not Taken" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good keep working on it!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 11:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Enh, it's a decent fic, though why does everyone have the Uchiha clan be a bunch of rapist bastards? (although it is the easiest reason for itachit to want to kill everyone else in it) Still, the storyline is good, though why do I see a Naru/Sass relationship in the future for this fic? Menducusuo. Anyway, too bad about losing the file, but this story is good, keep on writing. Later
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Reviewed By: anonymousperson On: October 29, 2006 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, you requested reviews so here is mine. It's an interesting premise. The pace is abrupt to the point of choppy sometimes however it's still fun to read. Please continue as the storyline is interesting and I definetely want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good but short. How will his family react to the fact that Itachi is alive and blind?
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. So they did something to affect his memory? will it wear off? Hope so. Sasuke would be happy to know he isn't dead.
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Reviewed By: SPKathrine On: July 15, 2006 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Rather interesting premise. I like how you're going about it and think you're doing a pretty good job. The thought that everything could change just by Itachi not having the will to kill Shisui. The 'forehead protectors' are called 'hitai-ate', and I do believe that it the correct spelling. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Itachi get back to Honoha? Who kidnapped him in the first place? Will the Uchiha Clan finally get what they deserve? I can't wait to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 21:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, not bad. I like your writing style, and you've got some interesting points in the story. I hope to see more soon
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Title: Good job.
Reviewed By: raigushiki On: April 20, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good story, showing itachi-kun as someone who feels, I think you should continue this... and never hate yourself, self loathing and animal abuse are the two most occuring things that lead to bieng a murderer
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