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| "Two Halfs Equal One Whole?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: two halfs equal one whole
Reviewed By: screaming dean 5 On: September 01, 2006 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very original. I really enjoyed this story. I really hope you will continue this story. I'll look forward to it. I'm a fanfic writer at fanfiction.net. If you want to respond to my review you can go to fanfiction.net and go to search at the top of the screen and type screaming dean under author. Once you get to my author profile you can send me a message from there.
| Reviewed By: Rabid Badger On: May 14, 2006 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Still too early to tell how good it will be. I guess the real story starts in the next chapter? Anyway, it seems interesting, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Just don't make it a repeat of the Manga/Anime with a few small changes, please.
| Reviewed By: Rabid Badger On: April 20, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a beginning I have read many times, but it is always an interesting idea. Although it was short (very short), it wasn't rushed through as most new fics these days are. Also, you don't have alot of spelling errors (You spelled Kasumi's name wrong), which makes reading much easier. Since it was so short, I can't decide yet if it's an interesting read. This idea has been done before, but never has been pulled off quite right. Usually it turns into a repeat of the first few volume's of Ranma ½, with some odd twists (Curiously I have never read a story centered on the actual training trip, they always start with the return to Nerima...). Are you going to focus mostly on humor or will it be more serious? I will read it anyway since there's been a distinctive lack of R/A stories lately (it will be Ranma/Akane, right?) Anyway, I think this can be an interesting read, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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