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| "Binah (Understanding)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: flyingteapot On: November 21, 2016 23:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that this story still exists here. Must admit that I
have a .doc copy of your fic on my laptop that I saved years ago. I
thoroughly enjoyed reading Binah for the first time ten years ago
and I still love every word of it ten years later. I recently had a
bout of WHR nostalgia and re-read this fantastic story over the
weekend. I just couldn't stop until the end and it will not be the
last re-read. Thank you so much for writing and sharing your vision
of how Robin and Amon fared after the last episode, you did such a
fantastic job! Binah and Misora's The Burning Time are the top of
the top. Special kudos to you for Nagira and Doujima - I will
always accept them as head canon. I hope to maybe see you active
again one day. Again, thank you for writing this, it still brings
so much joy. All the best!
| Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Mikage Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 21:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping for some Amon-Robin romance episodes in the series and they never came so this fanfic made my day. Besides that it goes perfectly well with the personality of all the cahracters. Two thumbs up!!! Mikage Aya
| Reviewed By: LadyTigerFuyuko On: June 09, 2006 08:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all of this fanfic a while ago, and was overjoyed when you updated in May, because the plot is so original and riveting. Like the plot, the characters are all very multi-faceted, a mark of good writing. This is a very good piece of WHR fanfiction, probably one of the top five I've read, especially since I did actually enjoy i, even with all the struggles you put Amon and Robin through. Still, I really hope this isn't the end of Binah, since I'd love to 'understand' more about what will ultimately happen with Robin and her companions.
| Title: attempt
Reviewed By: M Mehiel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 15:37 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm the author, just trying to read the review, here...
| Title: FFRG Review for Ch. 1
Reviewed By: Wolf in the Night [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 12:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, and thank you for submitting to FFRG! First of all, nice work with personality. You've only shown Amon's in depth, which was disappointing because Robin has a nice part in this chapter as well. Your use of "their" in the beginning was jarring. You didn't use subject-verb agreement well and it jerked me out of the story some. Transition from scene to scene was somewhat forced and quick. I felt you left out details that could have explained the scenery better. I think you do well with describing action. It was easy to envision what each character was doing. I would recommend thinking about how much knowledge your readers should have on Witch Hunter Robin. It took me awhile to figure out who and what some of the specialized vocabulary were and some new comers might not get it if you don't explain certain aspects of the series better. We here at FFRG hope you submit again! ^^
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