| "Bouncing Bundles of Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: nightwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAAHAHAHAH **coughcough** um yes it is very good *hides hand behind face in atempt to stop laughter** me=love for this fic keep writing! i think it's really good idea i'v only seen one other story like this type of idea with black having to take care of toddlers *rummges around on mediaminer* ach i know it's on there some where about ken and omi turning into chibis. *claps hands* but i still LOVE ur fic KEEP writing!
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Title: The almighty cousin
Reviewed By: Amara's Creator On: July 09, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyaa! I came up with the "Uncle Shoes" thing, if I remember correctly. And just wait for more hilarious moments yet to come! Oh, let me introduce myself. I'm Amara's creator, and the Authoress's cousin. Anywho. I'll have to pester her into putting up more...... hm..... >3 *grins evilly and rubs hands together, plotting* Naw, just kiddng, but I'll definately talk to her about updating. : ) ~*~Ama~*~
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio nsi On: June 27, 2006 15:06 CDT
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*laughs her head off* Ahem... *snicker* Please, do continue! I love the way Schuldig thinks about the kids. ^_^
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Reviewed By: annime On: May 08, 2006 23:30 CDT
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Too cute!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge nsi On: May 07, 2006 21:15 CDT
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*snicker* *snickers some more* *can't stop snickering*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: May 07, 2006 20:46 CDT
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ROTFLMAO!!! Okay, now that I've finished laughing myself to tears. This is great. Love "Uncle Shoes".
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan not signed in On: May 06, 2006 23:36 CDT
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poor schuldig...he's got his work cut out for him *snicker*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: April 23, 2006 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the way this is starting out. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: chanchananime On: April 21, 2006 15:30 CDT
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I can just imagine the mayhem now. Chapter one is a good beginning. Can't wait for the next chapter. "God is crying over them being in your care." That is the best line I've read in a long time. ^_^
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Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 15:21 CDT
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The story starts very good. :) I wonder why schuldig doesn't give them German names, when he was complaining about them not having German names to start with. ^^
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio nsi On: April 20, 2006 07:34 CDT
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... Wow. *silent stare* First of all, this is eerily familiar to a story I once planned on. Up to the girls' hair colours and all. O.o Strange. Anyway, the first chapter was very interesting. Like the way you write. ^_~
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