| "Kingdom Hearts III: Darkness In Light" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Please Update!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nessa Lynn On: December 08, 2006 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awsome.Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Reviewer 1.0 On: July 27, 2006 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC! THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING A STRAIGHT FIC, THAT ALSO INCLUDES SORA AND KAIRI....TOGETHER!
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Reviewed By: Miko Yumi On: April 24, 2006 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
In some spots the grammar was kinda bad. It seems like you have a good idea for a story, but your writing it too quickly. It should be really descriptive so the reader feels like they are watching it or something. I've read fanfics that made me feel like I was part of the story witnessing it. They all seem kinda out of character to me...
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