| "the sweet sweet smell of shampoo" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was great! I love Inu/Kag stories, but it seemed a little rushed cuz there wasn't any puncutation, but i liked it anyways! Keep it up! There will be more, yes?
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Reviewed By: fluffy802005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very hard to read. you are missing alot of punctuation and sentences. there are a lot of run on sentences. capital letters at the start of a sentence and a punctuation mark at the end of a sentence is a good thing.
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Reviewed By: Kittenkim [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. I think you should continue it, and make it not just a one shot. Unless that is what you already planned. I mean it, it was great. KUDOS!!! Kittenkim
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