| "Shopping Trip" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the second time I"ve read this and I still enjoyed it. Good work and very orignal,
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Reviewed By: stfuPaige On: July 14, 2006 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was amazingly sexy! Bill & Ted were hilarious. & Ryo? Liking spankings? I can so see that. >] Hope you'll write more stories!
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Reviewed By: Giggles23 On: May 08, 2006 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great I laughed my ass off!!! More Please!!!
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Reviewed By: Stardancer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely...super sweet
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