| "Hermione Granger's Secret Nasty Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: kagome95323 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 05:17 CDT
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omg!!! snape laughing!!!! the world is coming to and end!!!! lol this is pretty great... plz cont.
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Title: LMFAO
Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
line braking could use sum work but i cant wait tell the next chapter this is really funny lol
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Reviewed By: kyotogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 19:29 CDT
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Very interesting...
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 23:54 CST
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That was really funny and quite the interesting pairing in this one if what I think is going to happen happens. Can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time, ja ne!
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Title: Concerning my previous review
Reviewed By: DJ-Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:58 CST
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D2: like i said don't take my review to heart I wouldn't want to discourage any budding writers
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Reviewed By: DJ-Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:55 CST
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D2: There was never any chance of getting a perfect review from me, for personal reasons, so dont take this personally, nor too seriously. I'd say Snape is way OOC, not just as you say a little OOC. could be better, perhaps if you had kept it one-sided, instead of Snape and Hermione having a somewhat mutual interest in each other. just one thinking of the other in a way that was more than strictly neccessary, and the other being blissfully ignorant. otherwise I suppose it's not too bad
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Title: Hermione Granger's Secret Nasty Thoughts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Promising, but...
Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive the failrly bad review. This particular type of snapefic has been done before several times. That said, there is room to do something very, very weird, depending on what happens next. For now, however, it's a standard beginning and thus a six. The spelling and grammar left quite a bit to be desired, particularly the use of the "their/they're/there" homonyms. Try going through this quiz a couple of times, it should help you to distinguish between the three: http://www.better-english.com/easier/theyre.htm As you said, the characters are OOC. What I didn't expect was the use of an acronym and/or reducing Severus Snape to a nearly monosyllabic vocabulary. This is supposed to be a novel, not an MSN conversation. I hope this review has been helpful in some way, and I don't mean to discourage you. Keep working at it and you could become a great writer. :) James
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Reviewed By: Avanelle [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great pleez update soon. try to add a little more detail though//
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Reviewed By: punkin02 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 15:50 CDT
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Great story :) I like it alot, please update it soon. *pouts*
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Reviewed By: BlackRoseViolins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo this is Arielle i was just checking it out. Love you, seeya
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