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| "Blood of the Tainted" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: what's the hold up?
Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm dying to know what they'll do next. I know what I'd do if I were either of them but i need t know so update!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!
| Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
So like I told you b4, I'm notloving the yaoi but I don't have a distaste for it either, really..they are demon/youkai so it seems to me that lust is carnal and so are they, yeah...anyway. I'd still like to see less grammtical errors but it's not like I can't figure what you're trying to communicate, and, again I say, at least your have the guts to write. Me? I'm to overwhelmed to even try. *scratches head while wishing of a better way to critique your work*
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 30, 2006 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very intense. Inuyasha's uncertainty and angst are awesome. it makes him seem kind of deep. awesome update. Can't wait to see more.
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