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Title: dw24
Reviewed By: devil_woman_24 On: December 21, 2009 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please put the next one PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: ArizonaRed On: May 12, 2009 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Utterly fantastic story! I just finished reading the "Hinderance" chapter and eager for more! Yay! I love the emotion you portray in Vegeta and Goku...superb!
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:58 CDT
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Yay, mated at last! I'm so glad that hurdle has been overcome and the boys are finally able to have some fun and down time (or going-down time). Poor Goku- must be rough when you're in the mood to be the dominant male and a big preggo belly is stymying your efforts. Fucking Rock sounds like it could become a major tourist attraction. :D
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Reviewed By: iceyunaleska [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I first started reading it on your website and then I found it here on mm.org and I love it even more!!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 17:29 CDT
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That was unexpected for ChiChi to visit him, and very touching that she would want him to be happy with whoever he loved. So glad Goku finally overcame his fears and they connected minds. Now he can truly understand Vegeta's feelings for him. Hopefully he will finalise their mating now.
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 23:43 CDT
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I think Goku's little 'holiday' was just the ticket. I liked Dende's explanation of how the Nameks were linked and his thoughts on Piccolo. It was good to see some of the reasoning behind Piccolo's actions considering his role. It would be Goku taking a nap- I suspected that first, just because it would be so typically him to pick a nice peaceful place to crash out. Vegeta's entire set of reactions were great though; not only did he show how much he cared, the reaction to the kiss was hilarious. The most recent chapter is a pleasant break to the constant tension between the characters. I'm starting to think Goku is wrapping Vegeta around his finger- especially with the 'wake up' kiss scene, which was so sweet. Even after their reunion, there is still that time-bomb hovering over their heads though; I don't want to relax when they aren't out of the woods yet. Looks like Vegeta is going to have his work cut out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 03:03 CDT
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*snicker* That is so like Goku to innocently fall asleep in the middle of a field. Why were you worried, Vegeta? X) Their reconciliation was so sweet, and I found it hilarious that Vegeta picked out all the hardest recipes without even realizing it. Good to know that Goku is beginning to achieve some clarity, and hopefully soon he'll be to the point where he's broken down all the barriers and is ready to make Vegeta his mate.
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 17:25 CDT
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Phew, he was only sleeping. Loved the banter at the start of the chapter, it was funny and kinda sweet at times. Aww, the anniversary meal was very romantic, Vegeta really tried, bless him, and Goku appreciated it. I liked all the teasing in the lemon at the end, nice to see them so comfortable with each other, and I hope Goku completes the mating soon as they are really content now.
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 19:16 CDT
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Phew that was a close call! Poor Vegeta was so distraught, but I did love the scene of him wrapping himself around Goku and forcing him to live. I get the sense that time is running out for Goku to return the bond and worry that if he doesn't it will mean the end of both of them. I hope his trip away will make him finally accept it, though Vegeta will almost worry himself to death when he's away from him.
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu like doing that don't you just leave it hanging...so cruel...Up-date soon. I am realy enjoying this fic Princess Katreena
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG he died! Nooooooooo! Hope you have a way out of this *pleads*. Felt so sorry for Goku, he's missing his friends so much. I think thats the reason he hasn't returned the bond. Maybe he can't take the pain of losing Vegeta as well. Vegeta must save him and the cub somehow!
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NO No No you wouldn't...that is crule how could you do such a cruel thing as leaving it hanging like that please up date soon. I am really enjoying this story LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: redcarpetgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 21:01 CDT
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I have read all your fics.......
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Title: REMARKABLE ARTZ
Reviewed By: redcarpetgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are top notch for yaoi, did you know that? It was very enjoyable. I am certain the fans will love it. For it is very satifying and detailed piece.You should consider seeing a specalist author?Or maybe posting your work off to competitionS and enter prize CONTESTS, that's my advice. YOU ARE GIFTED!!!
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 00:57 CDT
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Lovely chapter! And a beautiful lemon. You really have a knack for writing "ki sex."^^ Poor Veg and Goku-- the side effects of the pregnancy are frustrating for both of them. It's nice to see that they still can find time for intimate moments in the midst of all the stress.
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