| "The Division Between Velvet and Steel" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: mzelda On: August 03, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and also your style. You make me love Zabusa and Haku more and more. Their last scene is damn sad. It makes me cry everytime I read and your fic also does. Sweet first, then sad. Although this one is your first, but you made it really great!
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: lans-chan On: January 23, 2007 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my all time favorite Zabuza/Haku fanfictions. You portrayed Zabuza almost exactly as I pictured him, (As most people re-create him as a sadistic man, hell-bent on torturing Haku-kun.) as caring/loving away from enemy eyes. I look forward to seeing other fictions from you in the near future. ^^
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Reviewed By: DracoDormiens [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloody hell. Here I am crying again. Every damn time. Well, I'm almost glad those links to the pictures didn't work or I'd be crying even harder. I love these two too damn much. Good work.
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Reviewed By: mariksgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would haft to say that I love all your fanfics. And that yours are the best that I have read in a long time. I love the Naruto-Kakashi one where they are in the forest. And this one made my cry a couple of times. So great job. I would like to see a Kakashi/Naruto/Sasuke paring.
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Reviewed By: Statuess On: August 29, 2006 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Apart from repetition of certain words a lot (Don't worry; It's also something I suffer terribly from.), it was excellent! When I realised what Haku was doing, my face was like this! (Dunno' if this'll work/is allowed:) http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y179/Chibi-Kitsune/Eijiface.jpg Though, that section generally seemed a little OOC (I KNOW Zabuza was being nice and all, but it still seemed somehow odd.) to me. Also, I'm not keen on KakaNaru so that made me blanch a little but I guess whatever floats your boat! ^^ But for the most part, this fic' was incredibly sexy and romantic, and I do love the pairing so much. It was almost perfect.
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Title: Sniff, Waaaa!
Reviewed By: dark vixen On: June 01, 2006 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally cute! I love this fic! Like I loved the one of Naruto-Kun and Kakashi-Sensei! Can you make one of Garra-Koi and Saske-Kun? I know that I have already ask you, but... Please! I be good! Ciao!
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Title: -_- Oh, my Lord!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was... Increadeble! You actually make my heart cry. I don't think you are a 'pedophile' I think you did a very beautiful art here, cuz what a writer write with the heart IS a peace of art. Do you think you can make one of Gaara and Sasuke? I can do one myself, but I want to read one made by a different point of view, Again, beautiful. Only a few(and thats a very few) had maked my heart cry. And you said it was your first yaoi? I don't think so! It was really good! Take care!
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Title: *wipes tears*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This pairing almost always makes me cry, and this was just SO well written, I adored it. And Naru/Kakashi is a really rare pairing that I would love to see more of in the future! ^___^
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