| "The Way Out is Through" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: GrapeBlood On: July 25, 2008 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have read stories that are ether dark, or touching and this is the perfect combination of both. I am going to have trouble sleeping after reading this one. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: NA On: January 10, 2007 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help but wonder that you said that there are just a few more chapters left. If that's the case, PLEASE PUT THEM UP! This story is too good to be left incomplete. Its been about 6 months since the last update. The wait has been excrutiating. PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY!!!
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Title: Really liked the first chap
Reviewed By: cheesylovesong23 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the first chapter, but you have a lot of trouble with past tense and present tense, you keep switching between the two, you need to choose one and stick with it. The first chapter was really in character and it seemed reealistic to the series. I'm not so sure about the second, but I've only read part of it. I really liked the first, though.
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Reviewed By: Skeletor On: August 10, 2006 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed what you have so far, nice style!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jesusman [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fan fic. and for once some one is actually posting! YAY!:) I know u just posted today may 01/06 but plz post soon. Cant wait.
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Reviewed By: Hidecki On: April 23, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic. I can't wait to read more.
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