| "The Plan" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice beginning. My cheeks hurt from all the smiling, smirking and what not. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
very enjoyable read had me giggling quite a bit =) hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: April 24, 2006 04:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dies Laughing. Sooooooo...who's gonna win the bet?
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Title: Ummm...
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a...interesting idea I'll give you that. But Heero was painfully OOC and the dialouge seemed...stilted...somehow. Nothing that can't be fixed, but it does need to be. Or maybe I'm just a jerk 0.o I just think the whole Heero talking like a teenage girl bit is kinda unsettleing. "I'm going to kill you...right after I'm done with this phone call. He said what?" Yeah. I'll shut up now.
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