| "Innovation of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Title: CONTINUE
Reviewed By: sar17 On: October 29, 2007 21:12 CDT
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Pleaseeeeeeeeee...please continue this fic, or at least let us know if you plan to stop writing it. It is the best fanfic that I have read in soo long, and I wish to know what happens between Kags/Kurama.
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 19, 2007 23:56 CDT
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i like the lemon but you should of kept the two males seprate andsome how give youko a solid body and have them be a threesome!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow
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Title: Excellent beginning!
Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a wonderful way to get all your characters in place and get the basics of their relationship started! Now comes the PLOT where everything goes to heck in a handbasket (a couple of youkai attacks?) and the YuYu gang gets to display their specialty powers. Nothing like DANGER to bring out how someone Really feels about someone else. Of course they absolutely must clean up the mess before Mom comes home... Or was Mom the reason the mess happened in the first place? Keep up the good work! ~ PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 05:46 CST
Comment/Review:
oh wow, i love this story and i think i read it on ff.net too. please continue! much love always hope xxx
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 08:34 CDT
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i liked it. I do hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Untill then. See ya
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Reviewed By: sar17 On: September 08, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN and YAY are the only words I can use to describe this new chapter. I am so happy that Youko and Suuichi agreed to be in the same body. Write more soon please! Thankies ^-^
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Title: erm..
Reviewed By: Green_iPods [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is please take some classes. It does have an original plot, but a story takes more than two main characters and sexual tension.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: August 12, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was flippin AWESOME!!! That was a wonderful first lemon! Congrats! Well I hope Kagome doesn't push them away to much...please update!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [NSI] On: August 12, 2006 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED YOUR LEMON!This chapter was soo amazing!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 10:50 CDT
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yay, this is wat Ive been waiting for! I dont think the lemon sucked, and I dont care much if body parts are called vulgar things in a story. Except for boobs, i hate that. it was a good lemon, don't keep urself down.
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Reviewed By: Silver kitten On: August 12, 2006 08:26 CDT
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That was hot. For your first lemon, you didn't do too bad you know. Please update soon. I want to know how kagome turns out.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: August 12, 2006 06:12 CDT
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Thats cold as shit how you just goin leave like that! After sex no less!!!! Whats goin happen with the 3. Is she sad or mad or lost WHAT??? Update soon. PS Loved the lemon XD
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 00:33 CDT
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i loved it!!!!!! not much more i can say ^^ i read ur message after the chapter.... only one more chapter till this is over? *tear* does it have to be so short?
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