| "Innovation of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: (not logged in) On: April 30, 2006 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kawaii!! Awsome chapter. I love that kagome was interested in vampires, as well as the description of her overall personality. the description/reference to vampires is very true. for in the stories especially vampire chronicles. i think its very creative that you infer knowledge about the subjects. please write more soon, i can't wait to read more!!! ^^
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Title: bravo-brava
Reviewed By: hieikuramalover On: April 30, 2006 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
during when youko wasn't getting much attention i acutuallylaughed and smiled. can u update sooner this time. PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEAS E?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLE ASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?P LEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE ?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEA SE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PL EASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE? PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEAS E?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLE ASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?P LEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE ?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEA SE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PL EASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE? PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEAS E?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLE ASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?P LEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE ?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEA SE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PL EASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE? PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEAS E?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLE ASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?PLEASE?
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: April 29, 2006 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Yoko jealous of the fact that Kagome want's a 'Vampire' lover? *grins* I loved it, hm...I wonder what will happen next and how their relationship will progress. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Mrs Cake On: April 29, 2006 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very creative! You mispelled some, but that's okay, you make up for it with your style of writing! I love the plot please keep up the good work 'cause now i'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very cool. I definently like this story so far. Keep up the good work! Ja ne, Michi
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting new prospect on a yyh/inu crossover. u have a great plot plot so far. please update soon, for i really am enjoying your fic so far.
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: youko_kagome_forever On: April 27, 2006 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: jade_of_the_jaded_death On: April 24, 2006 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very amusing at times reminds of a i had read about a phantom if there is more please write more bb4n
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Reviewed By: youko-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely interesting!! I love the originality of the idea. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Djqvee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great idea. very unique. please update soon.
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Title: ooh
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: April 23, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this it very good,please continue.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: April 23, 2006 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, I've never seen a YYH/IY like this before, very original, I must say you've got my attention. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 14:22 CDT
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that is a different way of having youko with him being a ghost and all, i like it so far please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: morbid rainbow On: April 23, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting what is going to happen next this is unbearable really good interesting perspective really youko is a ghost
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