| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 13:27 CDT
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Lovely done, as always. Nice dailogue and Kagome's inner musings as it adds a whole new perspective to hwo's feeling. Nice tiwst with Myouga representing Inu-chan. So, when will she realize he's the hanyou friend of her childhood? I mean, there can't there be many hanyous with silver hair and amber eyes around. Well, good, work, and keep updating!
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 00:04 CDT
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OoOo... great chappie! sorry if it took me so long to review...(my family and I went on vacation) anyways, great chapter 2 and three by the way, I loved it. I just hope kag's mom doesn't try to restrict their relationship anymore it's so annoying when parents do that!!! me and my bf had to sneak off because of that!!! OMG, i blabbered too much... ok, so, update soon!!! i can't wait... --miko_hanyou_gurl--
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story already, and there are only three chapters! ^^ I like the idea of Inu Yasha and Kagome living the life of the rich and famous. There aren't many fictions like that. Good writing, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Child_of _the_sun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a great story plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: miko_hanyou_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey... great fic, I'm excited to find out what's next! I really like this fic and please keep updating!!! --miko_hanyou_gurl--
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yhat was cute I really hope you update soon
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