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| "Unexpected Breaks" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you haven't written anything on this in several months, so I guess you've abandoned it, which makes me sorry. I really enjoy what you've written so far and am interested in seeing where you were taking it. Still, I'll list it among my MM.org favorites, so that I'll be informed if you do decide to write any more. For now, though, I just enjoy what you've written already. I've always been a pervie fan of the masturbatory hentai fic, because there's something about the whole "fantasizing about an unreachable someone while imagining them touching you" trope that I find simultaneously arousing and moving. It's almost always sexy, but it's often also sad, as it is in your first chapter. I like these sorts of emotional ramifications, rather than only the sex, and I appreciate how you've written these two chapters toward that end. I hope you do find your way back to this fic at some point, but if not then I'll just content myself with running off to read "Warm Afternoon."
| Reviewed By: brazenthought On: May 01, 2006 18:36 CDT
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This is so great but it also makes me sad. Inuyasha can be such an idiot,to not realize that he does not owe Kikyo anyhting since he never attacked her but she did attack him
| Reviewed By: ~Sami-chan On: April 26, 2006 18:44 CDT
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And......?? okay, *munches on popcorn* ready for the next installment. Ooohh! This is SO going to get really good ^_~ Can't wait for Inuyasha to 'fill' the role Kagome has made for him (okay, so *pun* intended:)) Update soon!!
| Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 22:34 CDT
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Wow, that was...incredible. I mean...the story, heh heh. Lol! Yeah, it was awesome! Please update soon! Naughty Inu watching, and naughty Kags but it's all good. Now, he just needs to join her. Someone knows how to write a lemon, woot. Loved it!
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