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Reviewed By: Saka-chan On: October 25, 2008 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very very sorry to hear about your father, I hope that he wasn't in pain when he went and I hope that you will be okay. I know the feeling, I was the same when my grandfather died just before my birthday. I give you the best of wishes and I hope that you continue writing because I love this story very much, I can very well see your love of the characters in it. I leave you with love and good wishes
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just hope kikyo doesn't drag inuyasha to hell with her...I'm a suker for happy endings.
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Reviewed By: Ronny65 On: October 20, 2008 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and it's great so far. Can't wait to read more of it soon hopefully. So just keep up the wonderful work and hope to see more soon. Thanks
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Reviewed By: LunaAurum [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:56 CDT
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hey, this story is freaking awesome! Are you going to finish it anytime soon?
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Title: Unexpected Breaks
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: sivia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say, probably one of the best hentai fics I've read....and I've read a lot. Probably too many. I'm looking forward to any updates you post in the future with baited breath.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 21:13 CST
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i can't wait for your next update. hopefully inuyasha gets the nerve to tell kikyo he doesn't want to be w/her. update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Inuyasha gets the nerve up to say something before he loses Kagome forever. It is starting to sound like she plans on never returning to the Feudal era after Kikyo and Inuyasha get together, or maybe even before. Good luck with everything and keep the updates coming when you can.
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:25 CST
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That lemon was so sad... =( I kept hoping that one of them would break down and hold the other through it, but it turned out heartbreaking after all. *plays with magnetic-nosed Inu and Kag dolls* I'm here, just as I promised! ^_~ Hee hee
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:44 CST
Comment/Review:
ANOTHER REVIEW BECAUSE YOU DESERVE IT FOR NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:42 CST
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Really one of the most unique story's I've ever read. And Sorry About your father. You must be a very strong person to keep on writing and update. Thak you very much. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: February 10, 2008 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry for your loss. Also, the story you have is hot and intense. I hope that you can continue to post more chapters
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 16:34 CST
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I am so sorry for your loss. Take your time to recover, and if you come back to this fic, I will be here. =)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry to hear about your father, I lost mine a few years ago to heart problems so I know what you are going through. I am glad that you updated this story so I could find it, it is good. Update when you can, it will be worth any wait.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 22:37 CST
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Very glad to find this, that you've picked it back up. The tension here, the anguish, is palpable. You really get drawn in. Very good work, and I look forward to more.
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