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 Title: Unexpected Breaks
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 22, 2008 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
 Reviewed By: sivia [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2008 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've got to say, probably one of the best hentai fics I've read....and I've read a lot. Probably too many. I'm looking forward to any updates you post in the future with baited breath.
 Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2008 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i can't wait for your next update. hopefully inuyasha gets the nerve to tell kikyo he doesn't want to be w/her. update soon please ^_^
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2008 15:40 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope Inuyasha gets the nerve up to say something before he loses Kagome forever. It is starting to sound like she plans on never returning to the Feudal era after Kikyo and Inuyasha get together, or maybe even before. Good luck with everything and keep the updates coming when you can.
 Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2008 01:25 CST
Comment/Review:
That lemon was so sad... =( I kept hoping that one of them would break down and hold the other through it, but it turned out heartbreaking after all. *plays with magnetic-nosed Inu and Kag dolls* I'm here, just as I promised! ^_~ Hee hee
 Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2008 22:44 CST
Comment/Review:
ANOTHER REVIEW BECAUSE YOU DESERVE IT FOR NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY.
 Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2008 22:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Really one of the most unique story's I've ever read. And Sorry About your father. You must be a very strong person to keep on writing and update. Thak you very much. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: musicmuse18  On: February 10, 2008 14:37 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am sorry for your loss. Also, the story you have is hot and intense. I hope that you can continue to post more chapters
 Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2008 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I am so sorry for your loss. Take your time to recover, and if you come back to this fic, I will be here. =)
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 04, 2008 10:00 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am sorry to hear about your father, I lost mine a few years ago to heart problems so I know what you are going through. I am glad that you updated this story so I could find it, it is good. Update when you can, it will be worth any wait.
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 03, 2008 22:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Very glad to find this, that you've picked it back up. The tension here, the anguish, is palpable. You really get drawn in. Very good work, and I look forward to more.
 Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 27, 2006 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I see you haven't written anything on this in several months, so I guess you've abandoned it, which makes me sorry. I really enjoy what you've written so far and am interested in seeing where you were taking it. Still, I'll list it among my MM.org favorites, so that I'll be informed if you do decide to write any more. For now, though, I just enjoy what you've written already. I've always been a pervie fan of the masturbatory hentai fic, because there's something about the whole "fantasizing about an unreachable someone while imagining them touching you" trope that I find simultaneously arousing and moving. It's almost always sexy, but it's often also sad, as it is in your first chapter. I like these sorts of emotional ramifications, rather than only the sex, and I appreciate how you've written these two chapters toward that end. I hope you do find your way back to this fic at some point, but if not then I'll just content myself with running off to read "Warm Afternoon."
 Reviewed By: brazenthought  On: May 01, 2006 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so great but it also makes me sad. Inuyasha can be such an idiot,to not realize that he does not owe Kikyo anyhting since he never attacked her but she did attack him
 Reviewed By: ~Sami-chan  On: April 26, 2006 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
And......?? okay, *munches on popcorn* ready for the next installment. Ooohh! This is SO going to get really good ^_~ Can't wait for Inuyasha to 'fill' the role Kagome has made for him (okay, so *pun* intended:)) Update soon!!
 Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2006 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was...incredible. I mean...the story, heh heh. Lol! Yeah, it was awesome! Please update soon! Naughty Inu watching, and naughty Kags but it's all good. Now, he just needs to join her. Someone knows how to write a lemon, woot. Loved it!
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