| "Gates of Revolution" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Clow Angel On: January 05, 2003 06:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it. ^_^ i hope u'll write more soon. |
Reviewed By: MadPsyence On: September 24, 2002 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's fairly interesting, but overall not my cup of tea. The sentense structure is nice, but I like them to flow a bit more..that's just me though. (to the author: Keep writing, well done.)
As for the Japanese Ryu Denki is incorrect grammar...it's basically just smashing 2 nouns together.. To me it seems just wrong... (Nihongo ga dekimasu.) it'd be better as Ryu no Denki (Dragon's light, Dragon of light) |
Reviewed By: Random Person On: July 15, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it should be Light of Dragon. Kinda like how Usagi (and her last name which i can't spell for the life of me) means Rabbit of the moon. So i think it is really light of dragon or Light of the Dragon, what ever you wish it to be. |
