| "The End of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: west On: March 12, 2008 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fic. you've done a realy good job so far and i can't wait to read more. Is Kagome going to get prego? wouldn't that put a twist on things... Well please update soon. ttfn.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow would love to read more poor Kagome
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Reviewed By: Stream0ftears On: March 09, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're writing skills are great but honestly I think this story is rather boring.
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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 16:11 CDT
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that is so sad! im glad that inuyasha found her though... even if he was too late to save her purity. i hope kagome heals! please update soon, i would like to know what happens to her. thanks for updating this story!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this story is very ...hmm...can't think of the right word right now. I like it so far. I can feel InuYasha's anguish, Sango's worry, Kaede's pain, I just can't get a read on Miroku. He is subdued. I think there is more to Koga's story trhan he told Kagome. I can't begin to guess what Kagome is going through. This is a great story, I can hardly wait until your next update.
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 01:13 CDT
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Can you update? I am curious to know exactly how Kagome heals, if she heals?
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Reviewed By: blueee On: December 27, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good stroy; A sad one but a good one. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 23:19 CST
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Amazing story, I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter to come and I'll definitely be excited when I am getting a email telling me that you have updated. Well I really like the plot and you definitely have me hooked. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: October 19, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't condone rape, but this is a good fic. Koga is such a bastard!!! I have some advice. When you have two people conversing it should be a seperate paragraph...this is not a flame. I did it also when I first started writing. Well look forward to the next chapter. Chanda
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 02:36 CDT
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Wow so intense in such a short amount of chapters! Well so far I like it! I think you're expressing all of their emotions very well and I really liked Sango's reaction the best. Most people only focus on her sister/friend relationship with Kagome but she really is much younger than her and that's very clear from the situation. So I liked her thoughts on that a lot, poor Inu though, he always blames himself. I'm worried whats going to happen when Kagome wakes up. :( The only suggestion I have is I would have liked to see a little more story on what happened exactly to make Kouga go mad. Maybe at a later point in the story though because it had a very dramatic beginning that I'm sure you liked and I did too. I'm oddly not offended by the violence haha, mostly because I write Kouga being an abuser in my AU fic. I've never read one of him hurting her in a canon one though, at least not in this way. Poor Kouga, hes always the bad guy hehe. Anyways really great start you have here, I'll look forward to seeing where this story goes next! I like your writing style :D
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Reviewed By: Blue*Star~Goddess On: September 15, 2006 18:15 CDT
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wow . thats all i have to say besides update soon .
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Title: The End of Innocence
Reviewed By: dark@inu On: August 20, 2006 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it cant wait for more it had to the saddest one i have every read and i hop koga get what coming to him for doing that to kagome. i cant wait to read what would happen after kagome wake up. it was so good it had me crying and what will the group go when kagome await or what will inuyasha do when whe wakes up i love story like this hop you'll keep up the good work and cant wait to read.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 22:29 CDT
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i hope sango slices him in half and whats up with the jewel shards why are they black?! UPDATE!
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I look forward to reading more of it. I'm sure that Kouga's death will be long and drawn out if Sango gets ahold of him before Inuyasha. Inuyasha will just slaughter him.
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 22, 2006 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That iz awsome i'm so emotional . I started crying but i kept reading. I hope Inuyasha finds him and gets him for what he's doneto kags. Well I love this story keep up the goood work. Its amazing. UP date soon!!!!!!!!!!! 'Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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