| "The End of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: The End of Innocence
Reviewed By: dark@inu On: August 20, 2006 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it cant wait for more it had to the saddest one i have every read and i hop koga get what coming to him for doing that to kagome. i cant wait to read what would happen after kagome wake up. it was so good it had me crying and what will the group go when kagome await or what will inuyasha do when whe wakes up i love story like this hop you'll keep up the good work and cant wait to read.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 22:29 CDT
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i hope sango slices him in half and whats up with the jewel shards why are they black?! UPDATE!
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I look forward to reading more of it. I'm sure that Kouga's death will be long and drawn out if Sango gets ahold of him before Inuyasha. Inuyasha will just slaughter him.
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Reviewed By: Bre`Auna On: June 22, 2006 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That iz awsome i'm so emotional . I started crying but i kept reading. I hope Inuyasha finds him and gets him for what he's doneto kags. Well I love this story keep up the goood work. Its amazing. UP date soon!!!!!!!!!!! 'Tanaga Mannie_bre'
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Reviewed By: kagome123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow tottally awesome
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Reviewed By: InnocentAnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is a very good story that keep the readers on edge. the pure fact that kagome got rape was a surpirise, but the fact that i Koga did it is unbelieveable. this is one of the better dark Inuyasha fics and i am just enjoying reading it. oh, i'm new too ^_^, if you can help me out , how do i know when you update? or any other storty for that matter. keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is pretty good. this is on my fav list and i just realised that it would be rude to not review...but honestly you don't really need much advice. the chapters are a little short, but i like the story...can't wait to see where you take it...i don't know how everyone else feels, but i know you have a life outside of fanfics, so if you take a little longer to update, but write longer chapters, i'll still be pretty happy...keep writing though, you are a good author!
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, tens, you better believe it. This fanfic just got so much better with the last update! I'm glad you brought it out of dangerous hentai regions. Examining the plot thus far, I am surprised that Inu-Yasha didn't go full demon when he saw Kagome. I am also surprised that Koga did not take Kagome with him or claim her as his mate. I wan't to know if Koga is ever going to appear in this fic again. When I first read this I was completely disgusted with the concept, but it very well written. Keep up the good work, thank you for writing this,......Lady Orange
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Inu4me On: May 28, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE This story, I have been looking for a good inuyasha dark fic for a while and I have found it. But could you please up date Im on the edge of my seat! Love Ravenstar
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Reviewed By: Kira562(Not signed in) On: May 21, 2006 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeek! Keep writing! Grr evil Kouga! DIE! x_x
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: May 01, 2006 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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OMG! Mae geez i'm your sister, and I know for a fact that Koga never leaps over trees, he always skids to a halt after whirlwinding up! Man, I thought you were a diehard Inu-Yasha fan. And please, update for t3h CU-I-3 0IV35' sake, yes I know you have AP tests but that's no excuse! An' mopin' around, you're gonna get fives anyway! Thank you for writing this.......-Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: Avarwen (NSI) On: May 01, 2006 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You asked me to read this fic, so here I am, reading it! ^_^ Lol. Okay, so, now onto the actual review. I think that you did a very good job with the descriptions-- you were very detailed, and the words flowed well together. I do think Kouga was a little bit OOC, but maybe that's just cause my stubborn mind can't really picture him hurting Kagome (even if his pack threw him out) so that may not count for anything. Other than that I think this was pretty well done. You've got a lot of potential as a writer! ^_^ (sorry if this came out all screwed up-- I suck at leaving reviews. >_
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Otherwise the fic is good" is what it said (look at previous review from me)
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:43 CDT
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:34 CDT
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HAY THANKS FOR THE HEAD ACHE "Yo, I am a L33T H4C|
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