|
| "Twilight Doom" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm. another good story. ^_^ i really liked the first part of the saga more but these are also quite good. it's so sad that Dierdre has become a half daemon * i love the name Dierdre btw, always have, i use it as a screen name sometimes. ^_^ * i wonder how Akarhsan will react when he sees his twin sister so old! lol. ^_^
| Title: my mistake
Reviewed By: u2beal999 On: May 29, 2006 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I meant Daemon Wars has corrupted chapters, not Twilight Doom. My bad
| Reviewed By: u2beal999 On: May 29, 2006 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful work that you have created. Original, but stays true to the feel of the characters and movie. Thank you for giving us this piece of yourself. In other matters, chapter 4 and 5 of Twilight Doom seem to be corrupted. Your time signature is inserted into the story numerous times for both chapters, breaking the flow of ideas you have going. Is there a way to correct this?
| Reviewed By: mosey927 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did it to me again!!! more, please i need more!! this is addictive, i watched the movie again today just so i could get a fix, and i'm thinking more and more this is better. ok now i'm really going to hold my breath.....(deep inhale)......
|
|
|
