Reviewed By: Nick F. On: April 30, 2006 23:01 CDT Comment/Review: I would love to read it but the no paragraph thing you have going on here is just a bit too hard on these old eyes. Try spacing and I'm sure more people would be able to give you an opinion.
Reviewed By:Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 17:38 CDT Comment/Review: The first chapter was really good, the second chapter was HILARIOUS!!!!